New Build - 4.0 !!! \(>w<)/


Heyyo, guys! AgentWolf, your always-late-premature-author is here! (>wO)/ All I want to say to y'all after my two months of absence is that the father of the previous build has finally given birth to "ODYSSEY-4.0"!! \(*A*)/


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Seriously, I don’t know what I need to say here cuz it's currently 2 a.m. in my country and, to be honest, I literally don't have any idea what to talk about as my brain is working very slow right now. And I think it's also cuz all the things I want to discuss are already written inside at the end of the build. ('UwU) So I guess there's no need for me to say anything since that's the case here. But not gonna lie, I am very excited for this build and I really hope that y'all enjoy this new adventure in the current build I made. However, I do have a feeling saying that this time, the build is going to be a little short to read but...I'm not sure. That's for y'all to decide. Please kindly let me know in the comment whether the story I wrote is too short or nah after playing the game, aight? (>3O)/


Anyhow, here are the updates I just added into this new build for y'all to enjoy! <3 :

- Two new chapters (like always (UwU))

- New CGs!! (cuz why not?!)

- More sprites for the mc and other characters! (>w<)/

- A little surprise from me to y'all regarding Bal's appearance! (>w>)


So yeah! That's all from me I suppose. Stay safe and stay healthy, my awesome squad! \(>3<)/ <3


Ps: To y'all 32bit PC user, if you can't play my game I'm really sorry for the error that has occured upon you. Am trying to find a way on how to fix that later as soon as possible cuz I'm still learning with the coding so that's why my game is not that perfect, to begin with, with the systems and whatnot. Also, sorry for the late update. I hope you guys can forgive me. Love y'all so much! (qwq)/ <3

Files

ODYSSEY-4.0-win.zip 272 MB
Feb 25, 2022
ODYSSEY-4.0-mac.zip 255 MB
Feb 25, 2022
ODYSSEY-4.0-linux.tar.bz2 259 MB
Feb 25, 2022
ODYSSEY-4.0 android.apk 273 MB
Feb 25, 2022

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First love this game!

The music the sound effects the art all so good!

You seem to have more sprites for Balthazar (and of such high quality too) than many other visual novels I have read. Which is probably up to around 30 now.

Next the gore was a bit much for me but more the description than the art quite graphic. 

Of course I don't much care fore gore in general so take that with a grain of salt.

Very much looking forward to the next update!

Thank you for your review dude! Real appreciate that! (/>3<)/💖💖


And I hope you're able to read the next build cuz there's gonna be something more interesting than this and I know that you don't wanna miss them. (>w>)


(And whatever you mean by high quality?! BAL'S ARMS ARE STILL TOO THICC TO BE TRUE!! XDXD)

This felt perfect, really sticking hard to their personalities and mannerisms.  And course the eye candy... I'm weak along that front! XD  The inner monologues really are treat too! :P

I don't really like hard gore/hard vore, but so long as its more isolated and infrequent (especially massacre/genocide), I don't think I'll mind too much.  The Beast VN by Ghostie is a very concrete representation of constant senseless violations, so much that it outweighs the more normal/heartfelt moments, truly cruelty incarnate.  Roughly cartoon/mature levels of violence are my tastes, not adult.  Sometimes though such details as this may be proper if only to be used/recalled later, to help prevent these tragedies.

Ngl that's a very informative comment and I really appreciate that, Mr Sarun! (>wO)/✨


Also, on how the characters acted throughout the whole story with their personalities settings were all thanks to certain friends who helped me give ideas through role plays. Gotta say that if it's not because of them, the story will never be good enough to be read. (ÚwÙ)

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Kinda having trouble figuring out who the top is, maybe that's a good thing? Idfk :v

Johnathan turns out to be quite cute, would smash 9/10. Bal has a big one, so he's gotta be using it, right? ;P

The gore part was acceptable since it's not too detailed (real glad I didn't see her half-bitten brain)

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Ara ara ara ara~ (ÙwÚ) 

You'll know soon enough about which role they're gonna have after reading the next build, ma dude. And I'll make sure that the scene is gonna be enjoyable af for you to read them! \(*w*)/🔥🔥

Second, about the gore art, I purposely didn't draw it too detailed cuz I know it's gonna be too much for some readers and gonna be quite disturbing to be drawn for a mere FVN. That's why I did it simple yet solid enough for it to deliver messages from the story to the readers about what's happening with the situation they're currently in and how serious the shet have gone into.









(But little did you know that they are gonna be more bloody CGs in the future builds which some of them are possibly gonna ruin your insanity and question the meaning of humanity itself. So be ready, mortal! (ÒvÓ))

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I liked! Wasn't too short for me. The pace felt a bit weird though but that might just be me disliking characters talking for minutes when others are being eaten alive.. Nitpick I guess.

Also the gore scene was kinda out of nowhere. I don't mind gore, but I feel it could have had WAY more impact. Some writer could maybe give a better example, but what i'd do is make the scene more personal. First, i'd make the woman someone you know. Then i'd set the scene so you can see her alive before the monster eventually eats her. Then the mc can go apeshit. Usually impactful scenes like this should be used to convey some important message right? Like the brutality of the world. Which means they would have to come from a side of peaceful carefreeness. This is pretty common in isekai anime tbh, when mc acts like the world is a video game and then boom, someone he knows gets chopped up.

Although it's kinda cliche, if she was running around smiling in a scene before the war, you might have gotten a dry tear from me.

Also I kinda wish mc was more serious about fighting. He acts like it's a game when he's meant to be this hero in the service for 5+? years. I think playful banter is still possible during action, but need to make sure it doesn't interfere with battle. Or that innocent bystanders aren't currently being eaten alive in the background i guess.


Keep it up though! I actually really like reading this VN.

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Oh wow honestly I didn't really expect such a very long comment but thank you so much for your honest review! I really appreciate it! (qwq)/✨✨


And about the mc was not being serious in the fourth paragraph, there's actually a reason why acted like that. You see, he is actually...mentally unstable. Always be optimistic all the time. Saying that everything is going to be fine as long as he keeps all the negative thoughts away from his mind. Even though he knows very well enough that it is not. And once he dropped the mask, something nasty thing will happen around him. And that nasty thing already happened in his world which gave terrible outcomes toward himself and his squad. This type of occasion also happened during his study back at the Academy. He became who he is right now all because of his friends who kept him in shape, mentally speaking(being all carefree and cheerful all the time). On the first day of his enrollment in the Academy, he was VERY different from the current version of Bal we know right now.


Damn, only if you know about his backstory lol. If I keep talking any further I guess that would be a major spoiler about the game and that wouldn't be fun now, ain't it? Don't worry cuz I will tell you more about his backstory in the VN in the future so be patient ma dude. (>wO)👌🏻✨

Man you don't have to spoil anything. I trust you. As long as you don't ignore feedback it's great.

(>3<)/ <3<3