Well I'm totally surprised at the way the story is told, amazing, I can't wait to see what happens next and see what's in store for us, this VN ODYSSEY - 5 stars
Holy shit I'm actually surprised that there are some people still playing my game like HOLY SHIT cuz it's been almost a year since the last update I thought most peeps had forgotten about this already lol XDXD
Anyway thank you so much for your support. It's means so much to me y'know (/qwq)/ <3
First I wanna say congrats on a very nice first game, you're very talented and I can't wait to see how this all evolves in the future. There is a small issue with save/load function; you can't load saves... aside from that, thumbs up to you
First of all, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR SUPPORT!! (/QvQ)/💖💖
Second of all, I'm a bit rusty with the game programming stuff since I've been all about writing and drawing lately. But I'll definitely dig into this troubleshooting when I get a chance. Anyway, thanks for letting me know about the issue, bruv. Your feedback is always appreciated! (>w<) <3
Eyyo Ken! Long time no see! (^w^)/ But now I sure can see that you're doing great. (UwU)
But not for me, tho. Got attacked by COVID (again). Idk when it happened, but it just popped out of nowhere, and I hate it. It's been a week since I first became bedridden. It irritates me how this sickness prevents me from making any progress on the update. I just hope this all ends soon. (T~T)
Ahhhhh this isss sooooooo goood ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh can't hide my excitement this is sooo good cute romantic hhhh love itttttt aahrahraragarahahrahragar
instead of a human going to a furry world it is reverse .for some reason i have a deja Vu moment when he uses the two sword for i don't know reason
And also i ship them both if not
Make sure the partner of the protagonist will be even cuter and muscular
1. Woah take a chill pill dude and thx for the compliment lol XD
2.Yeah the concept hit me after I realized no FVN has ever made a reverse isekai genre before (for me at least) and that's when I took my chances (>wO)7. About your deja vu part, I think it's maybe cuz of how Bal used his swords. Cuz that scene was heavily inspired from SAO. Otherwise, idk why you felt that way lmao. XDXP
3. (Nervous sweating intensifies) Jonathan ey? Hehe... Oh, boy('ÓwÒ)
damn, I once think.. basically on a visual novel, why does the protagonist would be a human in a anthropomorphic world? and what would happens when the situations are reversed for once... and here it is, That VN I always wondered about finally exist...
I love the game so much for the problem is for me I have to load an old ass safe file and try to find where I was every time I load of file that is for the previous build it says reload or so and when I do something it takes me back to the beginning then going through the hassle you didn't have to wear a curly with the old safe file I truly love this game but I wish that problem was fixed like seriously I'll get their bugs but I wish that one wasn't one of them but you take your time I love games are done right and put a lot of love into them💖🥰😍
Aww, thank you for your kind words! That was very nice of you (^w^)
Also, I am so sorry for the very VERY late reply. This is my first time opening itch.io in an actual month cuz I was so busy as I had to prepare for ma finals. But now that I've finished with those obstacles I can return to my original plan. (ÙwÚ)
Ah yes, about that "Save" problem. Ironically as the creator, I'm also facing the same problem and still figuring out how to solve it lol XDXD
Just hang on tight, aight? I will try to do something about it ('^w^)
I don't know why I'm saying...or typing. Whatever just your game is soooooo God dam good pls keep the good work of yours and pls we want more updates in the future...also it's my first time to share my opinion it the comments section so pls don't judge my opinions (~°^°~)
Sir...how is this your first visual novel this is something that seems to be created with experience and lots of it this floored my expectations in a good way
My My My, I must say for this being your first run. I really enjoyed the content that I read last night. The commentary kept it lively so thats my favorite part.I look forward to your later work this has great promise. Good Luck with your progress I can't wait for your next release!
Oof, I'm very sorry for the late reply, Mr. Jeunkim. But as you know, we're currently doing a bit of change with the previous builds such as the grammatical errors and the changes of character sprites, especially for Bal, our main character. And for sure, changing all 79 sprites of him alone is not quite an easy task. ('ÚwÙ)
Regarding the story editing, it entirely depends on Mr. Editor whether he can finish his drafts early or not. But of course, we're trying our best to be as punctual as we can by following the set schedule we have in our hands and getting them done to satisfy our precious squad members here. (>wO)/
Additional notes:
- We'll be distributing the edited build first before the new one.
- For the "new build", there will be three chapters for y'all to enjoy which means there is a lot of stuff going on in there. Which also means it will take us longer to finish it.
I hope you understand, Mr. Jeunkim. Again, I'm VERY sorry for the delay. (>T~T)>..*bow*...
You are welcome, Mr Neomark, or should I say, thank you for playing ma game! (>QwQ)>💖💖
About the new update, I'm afraid that I won't able to make a new one soon enough cuz as you already know, I'm on my hiatus a.k.a. vacation so yeah. Sowwe for that (TwT)
But do not fret, Mr Neomark! Cuz right after I'm done with the hiatus, I'll make sure to make my next update more exciting and twice as interesting as the previous ones. I always do! So be ready and cya in the next adventure! (^w^)/✨
So as a starter, may I ask you, what do you mean you can't access it? Was it a coding error? Which version did you just download? Window? Linux? Mac? Or Android? (>O3O)>
Well, I don't know if you consider the options (to drink the ale or do not drink the ale as a route), if so, that would be options to continue with the story, I thought it was to choose another route, such as choosing another character (Noah).
Ouh, I think I kinda understand what's the problem here. (UwU)
I suppose there's no problem, after all, Mr Ignacio. The options I've created in the new update were mainly to differ the route whether you want to see Jonathan and Bal having seggs or nah. Cuz some of the readers want to see them both having an intimate relationship together right away even though they've just met for a day, while others also wanna see them having an intimate relationship but slowly and naturally (To start loving without seggs).
I thought that was obvious, but I guess not. ('ÚwÙ) Sorry for the confusion, Mr Ignacio. ('ÓwÓ)
Hey i'm new to this VN and i have to say it looks awesome! you did really good on this I do a News Time on Discord so I'll be sure to say good things about this VN can't wait for chapter 9! Link out! ;)
sure Here you go, quick heads up there are not a lot of people talking much there but I'm here if you ever want to chat! here's the link https://discord.gg/Xm6WKn7V
Wasn't much because of the option I did choose, but it still natural and true to the characters, not sure I can understand how he can be THAT much intolerant, but no wonder he keeps having issues ^^;
Things do get frustrating and sometimes we need time away, and sometimes enough blows compound into a fracture, which can really cause a mess with our perspective on things.
How does one easily right a reoccurring wrong, when relations and trust plummet so low? I do wonder... it certainly part of his past as much as me stating my issues with issues. With time things will be revealed.
When I swing, I swing hard, really fucking hard..., it what happens when I find someone who has forsaken what they stand for, small hypocrisies are fairly normal, but when it stands to be as clear as day, I may have to result to scorched earth... oddly enough there is several anime characters who do similar for good or bad, going beyond rational to fight irrationality, toxins and poisons seep both ways once spilt.. after all sadly the only way to eliminate a parasitic fungal infection is to burn it all down to the ground, if that doesn't work out well enough or is even tried, that is where countless suicides can happen, but that is only if one gives up too easily, and doesn't seek out help. There are so many sad realities we are all blind to because we have not seen or dealt with it, but it works both ways, one cannot assume others will understand what they have or will be going through at first.
As the moon rises so does my philosophy..., been that way since 8, nearly 21 years now.
Its sad when enough instances of similar abuses lead to collateral damage because others are unaware, it is not fair to them, but neither is fair to the one who abused, thus by one not asking the right people the right questions often enough, major discords can happen over time from lack of communication, for things still can happen when one isn't looking, and 3 seconds is all it takes for something avoidable to happen... every 3 seconds...
Its harsh but it would also be irresponsible to drag others into unneeded drama, even if I was the target, but by the time things are realized even kind words mean nothing when actions have already been taken. Even in anger its important to be rational, it should only be directed at the ones who have made you feel that way and no one else, otherwise you are just exchanging one senseless tragedy for another, and the cycle can domino effect. There is many historic events, books, and movies on these sort of events, over 9,000 can occur in as little as a month, but only maybe up to 100 ever have any true or lasting impact, causing thoughts and perceptions to be skewed and twisted, to the point where even rationality is thrown out the window because the issues were not addressed soon enough before they boiled over. none are immune to psychological traumas...
Such is the Creed to fight against those who want to impose their way of thinking onto others, rather then trying to help each other understand WHY they think about things in the way they do... Learning is never over, knowledge is never complete.
Alright now this is my next one on my list to read. For you Agentwolf07 Redacted. Anyway, I have recently read one gore VN. A Hellish Journey. It did get me almost to trow up, just by reading the descriptions of the scene.
I know there is a warning on this, so… It will be my fault. (I hope I don’t get the feeling of trowing up again… Not even Doom does that to me.) Aside from that, I was giving it some time to read, I hope it is as good as I read in the comments. I will review it later since I feel like this VN is going to be a wild ride…sigh (I need to prepare in case I do trow up)
THIS IS FOREMOST THE FUNNIEST COMMENT I'VE EVER RECEIVED AND READ EVER SINCE I'VE BECOME A GAME DEV!! XDXD
First of all, no. I do know about A Hellish Journey VN and I don't think my kind of gore is more unnerving or disgusting than the said game... Or even Doom itself. ('ÚwÙ)
Besides, what you read in the comment about ma game here is solely based on their opinion. So when it comes to whether ma game is good or bad, it's all up to you. (^w^)
And yes, it is gonna be a wild ride... Especially this new build I'm about to post here if you know what I mean. (ÙwÚ)
Lastly, if you ever did throw up cuz of ma game... I wish you my condolences XDXD
My apologies of the code name. And yes, about almost trowing up it happened around 20 times while reading… The description of each scene was a bit too much. Now for the little time I have been playing this new VN, it is an interesting situation, also a bit of comedy here and there, I wasn’t expecting it too soon though… But I will come later with my full opinion once I finish.
the gore was way to much the wolf mans dick is way 2 big also is ther discord i like the cool bit ware they cut up the monsters but the gore with human 2 much
Ehhh, me is sowwe for the gore. (TwT) But I did warn about the gore, didn't I? It's all cuz I don't know how to express the gore through words. That's why I chose to be graphical instead of just reading it. (QwQ) Me is sowwe again if you didn't have a good experience with the game. (TwT)
Bal's D size was purposely designed to be like that (intentionally be thicc (>w>))
Yes, I do have a Discord and already added it to the description above. (>wO)/
Ah yes! I suppose the next build will be ready approximately in the last week of this month. I'm so sorry for being late than usual cuz this build will be the longest build I've ever done yet! \(>w<)/ And do you wanna know why? (>w>)
(I'm probably going to add onto this comment as I play through.)
Just opened the game; love the title screen. Just one little problem: the black text in the Options menu is extremely hard to see unless you hover over it and illuminate it.
Also, don't take this the wrong way, but would you be looking for a text editor, by any chance? I would love to help spruce up the grammar, if you're interested.
Five minutes in, just got to the flashback - I'm absolutely loving this. I have a creative imagination and it's running wild right now.
Huh. First time I've seen my name in a visual novel.
Gotta say, Bal took his time before he started fighting the horde. He probably could have prevented a lot more deaths if he'd acted instead of talking.
Not a fan of the face of the dead woman. The stomach and baby were mediocre, but the face was a bit much.
Oh, wow, you're really just gonna throw a nude changing scene in there. Ok, works for me, I guess. But he THICC, for real.
Reply to the first paragraph; YES! Someone has finally pointed that out! You see, I'm very well aware of every flaw my game has in it. And those text colour is one of them. I'm not great at designing so if you don't mind, could you please tell me which colour is good for the texts and another colour for when you hover the cursor on the text while complementing the blue colours on the bg? (QwQ)
Reply to the second paragraph; Nah it's fine. I understand what you mean. Like I said in the previous comment, I'm a self learner in English so ig that's why my English is a bit wacky. But I'm currently still living in my parent's house and still studying in college. Plus my parents don't let me have a job cuz of the Covid. Therefore, I don't have any money to hire anyone to edit my game regarding the texts. Moreover, I just consider creating my VN only as a hobby so it'll be a lot of investment for me to spend money on them when I just think of it as a hobby. And I don't really expect you to offer me your editing skills for free now, do you? ('>TwT)>
Reply to the third paragraph; Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed my story! \(>w<)/ Everyone loves a flashback in VNs when there's always a little element of suspense and mystery engraved at the end of it. (>w>)
Reply to the fourth paragraph; I already got an idea of what your name is XDXD
Reply to the fifth paragraph; Erk! That's probably my fault ('ÚwÙ)
Reply to the sixth paragraph; I'm more of a graphic person. "If you can't tell them, then you need to show them instead! (ÒwÓ)"
Reply to the seventh paragraph; Do you know how many times I'd fantasize about the mc(my only oc and fursona) after I started my novel long ago? Now is the perfect chance to do it! (ÙvÚ) and I love my man being thicc as well lmao
As far as coloring goes, I might suggest you continue with the idea of black outlined in neon blue. However, when an option is selected, it should just be red and shouldn't have the neon blue anymore. The same could be said for the existing neon words - if you select it, it should lose it's neon color. Because if I choose the Options tab, I can't immediately tell that it's been turned red.
In response to lending my editing skills, doing it for free is exactly what I was thinking. I write stories in my spare time in Google Docs anyways, and I would love to make grammatical edits to such a good VN for free.
However, I wouldn't want to look through raw code to find the text. If it was in a separate document, then I'd be ok with it. But separating text from code is kind of half of the work anyways, so I can understand if that's not something you're willing to put effort into.
And my name? I'm always surprised when a movie/tv show character has it because it's a biblical name, so most people don't care for it in media. But I'm even more surprised to find it in a VN. Especially a gay furry VN.
Bruh that's how I did it in ma first build. Exactly like how you imagine it and left it in the first two builds XDXD... But then when I looked at it I thought it was too messy and changed to how it is now. But if you think those colours are better then it shall be done. (>wO)/
Really?... Like REALLY?! ARE YOU SERIOUS?!! Dude that'll be great! Thank you so much for your help bradah! (>QvQ)> As for the text, don't worry cuz I already have them ready separated in another file! (O3O)👌🏻
Maybe tone down the line width by about 25%, if you can? Because I see what you mean by "too cluttered." Somewhat thinner lines should at least help, if not solve the problem. But since it's only the Options page, the categories of the Help page, the numbers on the save/load page, and the Yes/No selection when you load a save, it shouldn't be too bad.
At the very least, adding it to the Yes/No selection should happen. You cannot see anything on that window.
The color is not necessarily the best option, but it's better than its current state.
And yes, I would love to get started whenever you have the chance to send it to me. You can email me at njohnson4551@gmail.com (Now you know my full name, lol) and I'll take it from there. Make sure the Subject line of the email is something outrageous because I have a lot of college recruiters emailing me and I might see your email, think it's from a recruiter, and ignore it until Saturday. But if the Subject line is something like "I know where you live," or "Brought to you by Horny Furries International," then I'll know it's from you.
Alternatively, I'm NotSoSecretGay#1807 on Discord.
Yo! Very sorry for the late reply! Been busy editing the game, here and there, this and that, you know what I mean? ('ÚwÙ)
About the colours, yes I've done it and honestly....they looked better than the last time I remembered (ÓwÓ) So it means the colour text problem is solved! (>wO)/
About those files, I'll send them to you later cuz the ones I have rn are all created for a normal novel, so I need a little more time to edit them hence it'll be more fun to read as a VN. Are you okay, with that? Or do you just want me to give you as to how it is? (OwO)
FYI, about a few hours ago I made an official channel of my own on Discord related to ODYSSEY and after I've taken some rest for the whole day, I'll update a DevLog attached with an invitation link to the said channel later. So be ready dude! (/>3<)/
i went through the new scenes and sprites of the game,it is a 100/100 for me, its truly amazing and that new classy look for balthazar is just jaw dropping
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I'm happy to see how much you developed the story, I really liked it, honestly, amazing
Thank youuuu~!!! (/>3<)/ <3<3
And just wait till his bg lore. It'll be epic! (ÒwÓ)
Well I'm totally surprised at the way the story is told, amazing, I can't wait to see what happens next and see what's in store for us, this VN ODYSSEY - 5 stars
Thanks to my boyfriend (who forgot to give 5 stars lol) :(
Assuming that you already did thus I thank you in advance (^3^)
Holy shit I'm actually surprised that there are some people still playing my game like HOLY SHIT cuz it's been almost a year since the last update I thought most peeps had forgotten about this already lol XDXD
Anyway thank you so much for your support. It's means so much to me y'know (/qwq)/ <3
Nope x)
don't think people will forget this game, maybe most of them, but not everyone.
First I wanna say congrats on a very nice first game, you're very talented and I can't wait to see how this all evolves in the future. There is a small issue with save/load function; you can't load saves... aside from that, thumbs up to you
First of all, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR SUPPORT!! (/QvQ)/💖💖
Second of all, I'm a bit rusty with the game programming stuff since I've been all about writing and drawing lately. But I'll definitely dig into this troubleshooting when I get a chance. Anyway, thanks for letting me know about the issue, bruv. Your feedback is always appreciated! (>w<) <3
Now im curious, what is inside you're vault?
Is it "that" dungeon?I'll leave that to your imagination ;3
This is a message to wolf from Ken My PC Diedded and i need a new one but dw I'm good and okay and hope you're doing well ^^
Eyyo Ken! Long time no see! (^w^)/ But now I sure can see that you're doing great. (UwU)
But not for me, tho. Got attacked by COVID (again). Idk when it happened, but it just popped out of nowhere, and I hate it. It's been a week since I first became bedridden. It irritates me how this sickness prevents me from making any progress on the update. I just hope this all ends soon. (T~T)
Yeesh! That Sucks I hope you get better soon I'm still fine so far but I'm still worried about ya I hope you get better soon Wolf
I still love this vn and i always love it Wuwuwuwu 😭
I miss the update I want more.+1 I like this vn it's really nice can't wait to see the rest good work^^
Oh you haven't seen anything yet. Just wait till the next update.(ÒwÓ) *evil anime laugh*
Ps: Thx you for the supp dude! (>wO)/✨
I'll add something though, there was a jumpscare where the wolf spoke with the human man, I almost lost my soul 😦
Whenever I get bored reading a visual novel that is too slow and uneventful, I gift myself half a hour of this one to remember why I love this medium.
Bruh I was waiting for my student loan notification, but instead I found this. You literally made ma day, dude. Thank you (TwT)/✨
are there sex scenes yet?
Yes! You just need to choose the other option at the beginning of chapter 8. That will lead you to the spicy stuff (>wO)👌🏻
Let me know if you've found the route you wanted to see (^w^)
yep i got the one in chapter 8, are there any more?
Unfortunately, no. But I do plan to add in some more in the future, so please look forward to it (^w^)/
Yo wolf if you ever read this
... Yes, I've seen it and been posted to, which happened this morning ('Ú~Ù)
Better change yo password now
yep already did right after I saw the link in the dm (ÚwÙ)
Stay safe (ㆁωㆁ)
You too, and thank you for your concern, Mr. Osamura! (^w^)
Did your Twitter get hacked ? Lol
Not
yet... Why? (Ó-Ó)I put it in the wrong folder
Lol ok
you missing the one where I press v that reads aloud to me
What's wrong with it? (ÓwÓ)
*evil laugh* Just as planned~ (ÙwÚ)
Nice pic btw. Stan for KUMAK arts (>v>)👍🏻
Ahhhhh this isss sooooooo goood ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh can't hide my excitement this is sooo good cute romantic hhhh love itttttt aahrahraragarahahrahragar
instead of a human going to a furry world it is reverse .for some reason i have a deja Vu moment when he uses the two sword for i don't know reason
And also i ship them both if not
Make sure the partner of the protagonist will be even cuter and muscular
Mhh for some reason the link to the dc don't work for me :<
Aww, don't fret, dear squadmate! As I've switched the old link and pasted a new one. Go try it out now! (>wO)/✨
1. Woah take a chill pill dude and thx for the compliment lol XD
2.Yeah the concept hit me after I realized no FVN has ever made a reverse isekai genre before (for me at least) and that's when I took my chances (>wO)7. About your deja vu part, I think it's maybe cuz of how Bal used his swords. Cuz that scene was heavily inspired from SAO. Otherwise, idk why you felt that way lmao. XDXP
3. (Nervous sweating intensifies) Jonathan ey? Hehe... Oh, boy ('ÓwÒ)
damn, I once think.. basically on a visual novel, why does the protagonist would be a human in a anthropomorphic world? and what would happens when the situations are reversed for once... and here it is, That VN I always wondered about finally exist...
I guess we were curious about the same thing lol (>wÓ)👌🏻
I love the game so much for the problem is for me I have to load an old ass safe file and try to find where I was every time I load of file that is for the previous build it says reload or so and when I do something it takes me back to the beginning then going through the hassle you didn't have to wear a curly with the old safe file I truly love this game but I wish that problem was fixed like seriously I'll get their bugs but I wish that one wasn't one of them but you take your time I love games are done right and put a lot of love into them💖🥰😍
Aww, thank you for your kind words! That was very nice of you (^w^)
Also, I am so sorry for the very VERY late reply. This is my first time opening itch.io in an actual month cuz I was so busy as I had to prepare for ma finals. But now that I've finished with those obstacles I can return to my original plan. (ÙwÚ)
Ah yes, about that "Save" problem. Ironically as the creator, I'm also facing the same problem and still figuring out how to solve it lol XDXD
Just hang on tight, aight? I will try to do something about it ('^w^)
tack your time
I don't know why I'm saying...or typing. Whatever just your game is soooooo God dam good pls keep the good work of yours and pls we want more updates in the future...also it's my first time to share my opinion it the comments section so pls don't judge my opinions (~°^°~).....
God why do I make my self feel soon stupidps:how long does one chapter to finish?
Aww, thx for the compliment dude! (>w<)/ And congrats on writing your first comment ever lol XD
You're not stupid, you're adorable (>w>)Answer: About 2 weeks - a month, at most (O3O)
Oh wait what the name of the intro music in the title screen
I love it so much 💖Oooh, I know right! The music is so good for any epic intros! (>w<)
The name is "Superepic" by Alexander Nakarada. Enjoy! And thank you for playing ma game! (^w^)/
Sir...how is this your first visual novel this is something that seems to be created with experience and lots of it this floored my expectations in a good way
I've been playing this game and recreating scenes in my mind year after year when I was in high school during class, so yeah XD
Can't wait for the next update! :3 Also amazing game!! :D
My My My, I must say for this being your first run. I really enjoyed the content that I read last night. The commentary kept it lively so thats my favorite part.I look forward to your later work this has great promise. Good Luck with your progress I can't wait for your next release!
Oh shit, someone commented to me.I mean... Aww, thanks, dude! Also, thanky vewy much for playing ma VN! (/>3<)/✨
And for sure you don't wanna miss the next build cuz (spoiler alert!):
It's gonna be a three-chapter update and it's gonna be one hell of a rollercoaster ride! (>ÒwÓ)>🔥🔥
Aight, time to go back to work...*"scrys" and OwOs*
Still working on it! (>QwQ)>
Ohhh new Update
Welp, too bad it's just a minor update. Sorry for giving you fake hope. (T~T)
Im waiting for the new Update I hope Soon
Heh, I'm finally done with ma final tests! And sem break is also here! You know what that means?~ (~>w>)~
When is the next Update Im Just Asking its Been 71 Days Since you Updated It
Oof, I'm very sorry for the late reply, Mr. Jeunkim. But as you know, we're currently doing a bit of change with the previous builds such as the grammatical errors and the changes of character sprites, especially for Bal, our main character. And for sure, changing all 79 sprites of him alone is not quite an easy task. ('ÚwÙ)
Regarding the story editing, it entirely depends on Mr. Editor whether he can finish his drafts early or not. But of course, we're trying our best to be as punctual as we can by following the set schedule we have in our hands and getting them done to satisfy our precious squad members here. (>wO)/
Additional notes:
- We'll be distributing the edited build first before the new one.
- For the "new build", there will be three chapters for y'all to enjoy which means there is a lot of stuff going on in there. Which also means it will take us longer to finish it.
I hope you understand, Mr. Jeunkim. Again, I'm VERY sorry for the delay. (>T~T)>..*bow*...
really That Good But yeah Im Excited for The New Update Im Just waiting for more Sex Scenes 😅
Pfft! Understandable! XD
With that massive amount of stuff is more than justified, if its not on the notes, you should say it
When you said "stuff", was it good or bad? ('ÓwÓ)
Just start playing these, kinda like it.
keep update my friend.
You are welcome, Mr Neomark, or should I say, thank you for playing ma game! (>QwQ)>💖💖
About the new update, I'm afraid that I won't able to make a new one soon enough cuz as you already know, I'm on my hiatus a.k.a. vacation so yeah. Sowwe for that (TwT)
But do not fret, Mr Neomark! Cuz right after I'm done with the hiatus, I'll make sure to make my next update more exciting and twice as interesting as the previous ones. I always do! So be ready and cya in the next adventure! (^w^)/✨
#staysafe
ah i see, thanks for information.
game can wait, no rush mate
Before it happend, enjoy your free time,😄👍
gay gay homosexual gay
Do you like it tho? (>w>)
Yes
Gay gay homosexual gay,
Thanks for the comment,
And I hope you have a good day. XD👌🏻
Probably one of the best VN in my opinion\(≧▽≦)/
Oh right!, Are you perhaps(the dev) an Indonesian or Malaysian? (ㆁωㆁ)/✨✨
Daww, you're so sweet! Terima kasih! (/>w<)/ <3
Hmm, awak rasa saya ni dari mana? (ÚwÚ)
I only have one thing to say.
That's pretty.......sus
*insert amongus theme song*
Bal: "You're sus."
Woah what's up with that font? ('OwO)
Anyways, greetings, Mr Ignacio! (>wO)/
So as a starter, may I ask you, what do you mean you can't access it? Was it a coding error? Which version did you just download? Window? Linux? Mac? Or Android? (>O3O)>
Windows,
I think Noah is a bit too young lol. And I was hoping for some anthro love interest
Ouh, I think I kinda understand what's the problem here. (UwU)
I suppose there's no problem, after all, Mr Ignacio. The options I've created in the new update were mainly to differ the route whether you want to see Jonathan and Bal having seggs or nah. Cuz some of the readers want to see them both having an intimate relationship together right away even though they've just met for a day, while others also wanna see them having an intimate relationship but slowly and naturally (To start loving without seggs).
I thought that was obvious, but I guess not. ('ÚwÙ) Sorry for the confusion, Mr Ignacio. ('ÓwÓ)
Hey i'm new to this VN and i have to say it looks awesome! you did really good on this I do a News Time on Discord so I'll be sure to say good things about this VN can't wait for chapter 9! Link out! ;)
Aww~ Terima kasih! \(>w<)/ Glad to know that you had a good time with ma game, Mr Link! (>wO)✨
Also, News Time? Idk what's that but it sounds super important. ('ÓwÒ) If you don't mind, could you send me the invitation link? (^w^)
sure Here you go, quick heads up there are not a lot of people talking much there but I'm here if you ever want to chat! here's the link https://discord.gg/Xm6WKn7V
Great! Thanky! (>wO)/
And talk about Discord, have you joined my channel yet? If you have anything in mind about the game, come and join me at the Headquarters! \(>w<)/
Lots of other VN authors there too (^3^)
yeah, i have it's where i get my Update!
Lol that actually makes sense XD
Wasn't much because of the option I did choose, but it still natural and true to the characters, not sure I can understand how he can be THAT much intolerant, but no wonder he keeps having issues ^^;
Things do get frustrating and sometimes we need time away, and sometimes enough blows compound into a fracture, which can really cause a mess with our perspective on things.
How does one easily right a reoccurring wrong, when relations and trust plummet so low? I do wonder... it certainly part of his past as much as me stating my issues with issues. With time things will be revealed.
Also I want bed too! X3
Wait you've done reading it? That's fast! XD
And if I guessed it right, it seems that you've chosen the first one, is it? (>w>)
Also, it's quite a rare sight for you to be philosophical like this. (U3U)👌🏻
When I swing, I swing hard, really fucking hard..., it what happens when I find someone who has forsaken what they stand for, small hypocrisies are fairly normal, but when it stands to be as clear as day, I may have to result to scorched earth... oddly enough there is several anime characters who do similar for good or bad, going beyond rational to fight irrationality, toxins and poisons seep both ways once spilt.. after all sadly the only way to eliminate a parasitic fungal infection is to burn it all down to the ground, if that doesn't work out well enough or is even tried, that is where countless suicides can happen, but that is only if one gives up too easily, and doesn't seek out help. There are so many sad realities we are all blind to because we have not seen or dealt with it, but it works both ways, one cannot assume others will understand what they have or will be going through at first.
As the moon rises so does my philosophy..., been that way since 8, nearly 21 years now.
Its sad when enough instances of similar abuses lead to collateral damage because others are unaware, it is not fair to them, but neither is fair to the one who abused, thus by one not asking the right people the right questions often enough, major discords can happen over time from lack of communication, for things still can happen when one isn't looking, and 3 seconds is all it takes for something avoidable to happen... every 3 seconds...
Its harsh but it would also be irresponsible to drag others into unneeded drama, even if I was the target, but by the time things are realized even kind words mean nothing when actions have already been taken. Even in anger its important to be rational, it should only be directed at the ones who have made you feel that way and no one else, otherwise you are just exchanging one senseless tragedy for another, and the cycle can domino effect. There is many historic events, books, and movies on these sort of events, over 9,000 can occur in as little as a month, but only maybe up to 100 ever have any true or lasting impact, causing thoughts and perceptions to be skewed and twisted, to the point where even rationality is thrown out the window because the issues were not addressed soon enough before they boiled over. none are immune to psychological traumas...
Such is the Creed to fight against those who want to impose their way of thinking onto others, rather then trying to help each other understand WHY they think about things in the way they do... Learning is never over, knowledge is never complete.
What the fuc- WHO ARE YOU?! WHERE'S MR SARUN?! (ÓAÒ)
Aku tak faham apa yang hang cakap! I'm not majoring in English! (>Q~Q)>
But sure they sound deep tho (UwU)👌🏻✨
Alright now this is my next one on my list to read. For you Agentwolf07 Redacted. Anyway, I have recently read one gore VN. A Hellish Journey. It did get me almost to trow up, just by reading the descriptions of the scene.
I know there is a warning on this, so… It will be my fault. (I hope I don’t get the feeling of trowing up again… Not even Doom does that to me.) Aside from that, I was giving it some time to read, I hope it is as good as I read in the comments. I will review it later since I feel like this VN is going to be a wild ride… sigh (I need to prepare in case I do trow up)
THIS IS FOREMOST THE FUNNIEST COMMENT I'VE EVER RECEIVED AND READ EVER SINCE I'VE BECOME A GAME DEV!! XDXD
First of all, no. I do know about A Hellish Journey VN and I don't think my kind of gore is more unnerving or disgusting than the said game... Or even Doom itself. ('ÚwÙ)
Besides, what you read in the comment about ma game here is solely based on their opinion. So when it comes to whether ma game is good or bad, it's all up to you. (^w^)
And yes, it is gonna be a wild ride... Especially this new build I'm about to post here if you know what I mean. (ÙwÚ)
Lastly, if you ever did throw up cuz of ma game... I wish you my condolences XDXD
Also, don't expose me with the codename (>w>)My apologies of the code name. And yes, about almost trowing up it happened around 20 times while reading… The description of each scene was a bit too much. Now for the little time I have been playing this new VN, it is an interesting situation, also a bit of comedy here and there, I wasn’t expecting it too soon though… But I will come later with my full opinion once I finish.
Aight, can't wait for your full review soon. Don't forget to download the new build too! (>wO)/✨
There's one REALLY gorey scene. But pretty much only that one. Hint: monster + woman
I just found your vn and it is amazing I can't wait for more
I'm glad that you enjoyed my game, Mr mp5050. The new update is coming on its way soon enough that you wouldn't see it coming so be prepared! (>w<)7🔥🔥
the gore was way to much the wolf mans dick is way 2 big also is ther discord i like the cool bit ware they cut up the monsters but the gore with human 2 much
Ehhh, me is sowwe for the gore. (TwT) But I did warn about the gore, didn't I? It's all cuz I don't know how to express the gore through words. That's why I chose to be graphical instead of just reading it. (QwQ) Me is sowwe again if you didn't have a good experience with the game. (TwT)
Bal's D size was purposely designed to be like that (intentionally be thicc (>w>))
Yes, I do have a Discord and already added it to the description above. (>wO)/
Do we have an estimate on the next update?
Ah yes! I suppose the next build will be ready approximately in the last week of this month. I'm so sorry for being late than usual cuz this build will be the longest build I've ever done yet! \(>w<)/ And do you wanna know why? (>w>)
I would prefer a surprise, as this game is full of them!
Wise choice, mortal! Muahaha! \(ÒwÓ)/
(Thx for the compliment btw (>^3^)>)
(I'm probably going to add onto this comment as I play through.)
Just opened the game; love the title screen. Just one little problem: the black text in the Options menu is extremely hard to see unless you hover over it and illuminate it.
Also, don't take this the wrong way, but would you be looking for a text editor, by any chance? I would love to help spruce up the grammar, if you're interested.
Five minutes in, just got to the flashback - I'm absolutely loving this. I have a creative imagination and it's running wild right now.
Huh. First time I've seen my name in a visual novel.
Gotta say, Bal took his time before he started fighting the horde. He probably could have prevented a lot more deaths if he'd acted instead of talking.
Not a fan of the face of the dead woman. The stomach and baby were mediocre, but the face was a bit much.
Oh, wow, you're really just gonna throw a nude changing scene in there. Ok, works for me, I guess. But he THICC, for real.
Reply to the first paragraph; YES! Someone has finally pointed that out! You see, I'm very well aware of every flaw my game has in it. And those text colour is one of them. I'm not great at designing so if you don't mind, could you please tell me which colour is good for the texts and another colour for when you hover the cursor on the text while complementing the blue colours on the bg? (QwQ)
Reply to the second paragraph; Nah it's fine. I understand what you mean. Like I said in the previous comment, I'm a self learner in English so ig that's why my English is a bit wacky. But I'm currently still living in my parent's house and still studying in college. Plus my parents don't let me have a job cuz of the Covid. Therefore, I don't have any money to hire anyone to edit my game regarding the texts. Moreover, I just consider creating my VN only as a hobby so it'll be a lot of investment for me to spend money on them when I just think of it as a hobby. And I don't really expect you to offer me your editing skills for free now, do you? ('>TwT)>
Reply to the third paragraph; Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed my story! \(>w<)/ Everyone loves a flashback in VNs when there's always a little element of suspense and mystery engraved at the end of it. (>w>)
Reply to the fourth paragraph; I already got an idea of what your name is XDXD
Reply to the fifth paragraph;
Erk! That's probably my fault ('ÚwÙ)Reply to the sixth paragraph; I'm more of a graphic person. "If you can't tell them, then you need to show them instead! (ÒwÓ)"
Reply to the seventh paragraph; Do you know how many times I'd fantasize about the mc(my only oc and fursona) after I started my novel long ago? Now is the perfect chance to do it! (ÙvÚ)
and I love my man being thicc as well lmaoAs far as coloring goes, I might suggest you continue with the idea of black outlined in neon blue. However, when an option is selected, it should just be red and shouldn't have the neon blue anymore. The same could be said for the existing neon words - if you select it, it should lose it's neon color. Because if I choose the Options tab, I can't immediately tell that it's been turned red.
In response to lending my editing skills, doing it for free is exactly what I was thinking. I write stories in my spare time in Google Docs anyways, and I would love to make grammatical edits to such a good VN for free.
However, I wouldn't want to look through raw code to find the text. If it was in a separate document, then I'd be ok with it. But separating text from code is kind of half of the work anyways, so I can understand if that's not something you're willing to put effort into.
And my name? I'm always surprised when a movie/tv show character has it because it's a biblical name, so most people don't care for it in media. But I'm even more surprised to find it in a VN. Especially a gay furry VN.
Bruh that's how I did it in ma first build. Exactly like how you imagine it and left it in the first two builds XDXD... But then when I looked at it I thought it was too messy and changed to how it is now. But if you think those colours are better then it shall be done. (>wO)/
Really?... Like REALLY?! ARE YOU SERIOUS?!! Dude that'll be great! Thank you so much for your help bradah! (>QvQ)> As for the text, don't worry cuz I already have them ready separated in another file! (O3O)👌🏻
About your name; I FUKKEN KNEW IT! XDXD
Maybe tone down the line width by about 25%, if you can? Because I see what you mean by "too cluttered." Somewhat thinner lines should at least help, if not solve the problem. But since it's only the Options page, the categories of the Help page, the numbers on the save/load page, and the Yes/No selection when you load a save, it shouldn't be too bad.
At the very least, adding it to the Yes/No selection should happen. You cannot see anything on that window.
The color is not necessarily the best option, but it's better than its current state.
And yes, I would love to get started whenever you have the chance to send it to me. You can email me at njohnson4551@gmail.com (Now you know my full name, lol) and I'll take it from there. Make sure the Subject line of the email is something outrageous because I have a lot of college recruiters emailing me and I might see your email, think it's from a recruiter, and ignore it until Saturday. But if the Subject line is something like "I know where you live," or "Brought to you by Horny Furries International," then I'll know it's from you.
Alternatively, I'm NotSoSecretGay#1807 on Discord.
Yo! Very sorry for the late reply! Been busy editing the game, here and there, this and that, you know what I mean? ('ÚwÙ)
About the colours, yes I've done it and honestly....they looked better than the last time I remembered (ÓwÓ) So it means the colour text problem is solved! (>wO)/
About those files, I'll send them to you later cuz the ones I have rn are all created for a normal novel, so I need a little more time to edit them hence it'll be more fun to read as a VN. Are you okay, with that? Or do you just want me to give you as to how it is? (OwO)
FYI, about a few hours ago I made an official channel of my own on Discord related to ODYSSEY and after I've taken some rest for the whole day, I'll update a DevLog attached with an invitation link to the said channel later. So be ready dude! (/>3<)/
Hi how are u ? I have a question about balthazar, will he also have a love interest for Noah or just his father? Grettings.
Decent! Thank you for asking! (>wO)/
Hmmm~ I wonder~ In your opinion, what do you think? (>v>)
Also, greetings 2u2! (U3U) <3
Yo! Sorry that I just deleted your post below... Misclicked it ('UwU)
Anyway, let's just wait for the next build to come, aight? XD
SO STAY TUNE!.... I guess?
As of the current build, are there sex scenes?
Nope, that will be in the next build. (ÓwÓ)
PS:I'm so excited for the next build wish you a great after exam holiday
TERIMA KASIH!!(Q3Q)/💖💖
i went through the new scenes and sprites of the game,it is a 100/100 for me, its truly amazing and that new classy look for balthazar is just jaw dropping
I'm very glad that you liked them! (>w<)/✨✨
*running back and forth through the kitchen in happiness*NEVER thought i will one day find a VN this beautiful in my life
*sips a coffee*
*🔥🔥A SUDDEN BURST OF MOTIVATION HAS BEEN SET ABLAZE🔥🔥*
Ps: Thank you for the support! I hope you'll enjoy the upcoming build! (>wO)/✨